Everything’s gone silent
as though a group of doctors has entered
the children’s ward.
Drone of water vehicles stowed,
a couple strolls the long edge of conversation.
Waves, like fear, have subsided—
only their small breaths remain.
A congregate of gulls pass overhead.
I stop counting at ten, tens. I stopped counting long ago,
days absent from school, then returning
soundless as a sunset. There were sicker kids—
a boy from fire, patched with skin grafts,
a girl who walked metal in metal braces. I wonder
where the seagull is this morning,
the one with only one leg, ruined, elegant,
keeping up with flock.
Does it live to teach me something I already know?
Everything has gone quiet. Hushed.
As though the chaplain has arrived.
Lost shovels and forgotten tee-shirts
lie unsaved. In another place
an orchestra has begun its evening tuning.
The sun is sinking. It touches the edge of a wound.
15 thoughts on “Lake Michigan Sunset”
Punch to the gut. With time travel.
Very powerful. Thank you
I an a former patient in a pediatric ward. You capture the rhythm of grief and the unsaid perfectly, Thank you.
Thank you, Sarah. Hope you are well.
The imagery transports me to a world of feeling the child’s loneliness. A beautiful poem.
Thank you, Nadia – and congratulations on all your good good work.
I love this poem. So much said and left unsaid. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you, Ellen. Yes, the silences in the poem – mimic the silences in the ward.
The way you have interwoven the present and memory is so elegant. A wonderful poem.
Wordsworth’s “…powerful feelings recollected in tranquility.” And Philip Lopate’s “double perspective” – the writer then, the writer now. Thank you so much for your comment.
Amazing and beautifully written poem. So right on.
Thank you, Pris! So glad you “get it” – a term I hate to use – but it seems right for your comment.
Joy, what a heartfelt honest poem.
You took me there along with you. The beginning and end lines are so strong. Made me want to read the poem again. Thank you for all the compassionate and generous work you have done.
Susan, what a nice comment. Thank you. And coming from you…I’m deeply honored. I love how you mention the lines making you want to read the poem again. I really do write poems that way – and they are poems I like to read as well. Thanks again.
This is just a beautiful, haunting, and elegant poem.
Thank you Laurel, PULSE is such a wonderful magazine. I’m honored to have work on these pages, and just love that you find this poem “elegant” – thank you. The children in hospitals need and elegant voice.