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Lake Michigan Sunset

Everything’s gone silent
as though a group of doctors has entered
the children’s ward.

Drone of water vehicles stowed,
a couple strolls the long edge of conversation.

Waves, like fear, have subsided—
only their small breaths remain.

A congregate of gulls pass overhead.
I stop counting at ten, tens. I stopped counting long ago,

days absent from school, then returning
soundless as a sunset. There were sicker kids—
a boy from fire, patched with skin grafts,

a girl who walked metal in metal braces. I wonder
where the seagull is this morning,
the one with only one leg, ruined, elegant,
keeping up with flock.

Does it live to teach me something I already know?

Everything has gone quiet. Hushed.
As though the chaplain has arrived.

Lost shovels and forgotten tee-shirts
lie unsaved. In another place
an orchestra has begun its evening tuning.

The sun is sinking. It touches the edge of a wound.

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Joy Gaines-Friedler is the author of four books of poetry. Her latest, a book centered on the AIDS epidemic, was a 2021 Celery City Chapbook Poetry Prize winner. Joy teaches poetry and memoir for nonprofits in the Detroit area and elsewhere online. She has taught poetry to male lifers in prison, to asylum seekers from western Africa at Freedom House Detroit, to young adults at risk for suicide through Common Ground and to parents of murdered children.

About the Poem

“This poem is an attempt to come sideways at the experience of growing up in and out of the hospital from ages five to twelve. Returning to school, I was often behind academically, but wiser about the diversity of the world—and with great empathy for the underdog. In this poem I think I have taken the perspective of a parent of a sick child, or perhaps just an adult looking back.”

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15 thoughts on “Lake Michigan Sunset”

  1. I an a former patient in a pediatric ward. You capture the rhythm of grief and the unsaid perfectly, Thank you.

    1. Wordsworth’s “…powerful feelings recollected in tranquility.” And Philip Lopate’s “double perspective” – the writer then, the writer now. Thank you so much for your comment.

  2. Joy, what a heartfelt honest poem.
    You took me there along with you. The beginning and end lines are so strong. Made me want to read the poem again. Thank you for all the compassionate and generous work you have done.

    1. Susan, what a nice comment. Thank you. And coming from you…I’m deeply honored. I love how you mention the lines making you want to read the poem again. I really do write poems that way – and they are poems I like to read as well. Thanks again.

    1. Thank you Laurel, PULSE is such a wonderful magazine. I’m honored to have work on these pages, and just love that you find this poem “elegant” – thank you. The children in hospitals need and elegant voice.

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