Bill Waters July 12, 2020 at 11:18 am Line 3’s twist actually gave me a physical feeling of dread! It just goes to show that a poem doesn’t have to be long to be strong! Reply
Barbara Kaufmann July 13, 2020 at 11:55 am Thank you for your kind comment, Bill. I am glad you felt this one. Reply
Pris Campbell July 4, 2020 at 5:19 am Excellent haiku. One of my favorites this year. measures my future……what a vivid phrase. Reply
Pringl Miller July 3, 2020 at 8:47 pm This Haiku made my heart skip a beat. So powerful in just 7 words! Thank you for sharing Barbara Kaufmann. Reply
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Line 3’s twist actually gave me a physical feeling of dread! It just goes to show that a poem doesn’t have to be long to be strong!
Thank you for your kind comment, Bill. I am glad you felt this one.
Excellent haiku. One of my favorites this year. measures my future……what a vivid phrase.
So glad you enjoyed this one, Pris.
This Haiku made my heart skip a beat. So powerful in just 7 words! Thank you for sharing Barbara Kaufmann.
Thank you, Pringl. I am so glad this spoke to you!