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david verge
March 24, 2014 at 4:56 am

pure beauty
you captured the fleeing moment

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Jeremy Shatan
December 9, 2013 at 3:12 pm

Great! Really captures the complexity of the moment.

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Elaine Whitman
December 7, 2013 at 12:18 am

Your use of two images that both DO… and do NOT… go together makes this a powerful haiku. I also like your use of alliteration (“she shifted,” “hear leaves”). You have clearly chosen each word with care; the words have brought me into the story. Bravo!

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Shelley
December 6, 2013 at 6:23 pm

Love the vivid imagery and emotions contained in so few words…

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